The Offense

Deanna Mujaj, Verrazzano Class of 2026, completed major in English Writing and minor in Philosophy

Studying English with a concentration on writing, I naturally decided to write a short story for my capstone. The hard part of beginning any creative task is finding the right inspiration. My parents are from Dnipro, Ukraine, and immigrated to the U.S. just a few years before I was born. With most of my extended family still living in Ukraine, the ongoing war between Ukraine and Russia has been a constant topic of discussion (and sorrow) among my family. It is difficult to imagine that had my parents not decided to come to America, I would be living in Ukraine during this horrible time. This topic was the inspiration for my short story, which follows a young man and his family in Ukraine at the start of the war, their fear, their reactions to the threat of death, and the sense of duty which compels every citizen who loves their country.

I expected the capstone to be a challenge; I had never written anything so long before. I anticipated the final work to be about 18 pages, but it ended up being 22 (and could have easily been much longer if the semester was not so short!). Once the topic had been established, the writing process was quite easy, and ideas flowed freely onto the page. My mentor, Simon Reader, was a tremendous help with the brainstorming of the plot, the character arcs, and making sure the story was compelling. We held regular meetings in which he provided notes for my writing, acting as both an editor and a guide. Looking back, the work was much easier and much more fulfilling than I anticipated. Writing about a topic that interests me, and taking inspiration from my own family truly helped me express the emotions that had been building up within me.

Part of my research was reading short stories and books that revolve around the war in Ukraine, including You Don't Know What War Is: The Diary of a Young Girl from Ukraine by Yeva Skalietska, and Jonathon Safran Foer's comedic, but heartbreaking novel, Everything is Illuminated. As further research, I try to keep up with the news concerning the war, and I occasionally read short stories and flash non-fiction concerning the topic. Overall, this experience has inspired me to write more and not shy away from taking inspiration from my family and my day-to-day life.