Monday, July 7, 2025

Have You Ever Thought About the Second Person?

Gianna Liantonio, Verrazzano Class of 2025, completed major in English Writing and minors in ASL and Italian

I wrote a critical analysis on the creative nonfiction essay, "You Are the Second Person" by Kiese Laymon, with Professor Cate Marvin as my mentor. We explored the different themes of the essay such as racism, prejudice, family, health and revelation.

Kiese Laymon wrote about his experience working under a toxic editor for five years to gain his approval, but realized in the end he was not going to get his book published. He decided to put himself first and write what he wanted to write, publishing many books and essays.

He is a strong advocate for Black writers and is authentic in his work, never filtering what he knows is important to be said. He writes from the heart and if it’s not real, it has no business getting published. He wants to be able to stand by his work years later, but said there is no shame in revising over and over. He has revised works that seemed perfect at the time, but wanted to make them even better. He is a hard-working writer who, from this experience, learned the types of books he wants to write and would not let anyone dictate the topics he includes.

I read the essay in Professor Marvin’s creative writing class, and appreciated Laymon’s realistic view of the publishing world that you normally would not hear about. I enjoyed reading and learning about Laymon and his experience and identified with this piece because I hope to one day work in publishing and editing.

I knew I wanted to do a creative writing project of some kind for my capstone and felt Professor Marvin would be the perfect mentor. I enjoyed her class immensely and learned a lot to help me become a better writer.

The capstone was a summary of the essay and delved into different themes we discovered as I was writing. I realized I had more I could write about than I initially thought, gaining new insights each time I read the essay.

The biggest challenge was the page count and being able to write new ideas without repeating myself, and I was surprised with how many pages I ended up with at the end. I did enjoy writing this paper as it helped me interpret the essay in different ways and discover more themes than I initially saw. The easy part was that I enjoyed reading the essay over and over, analyzing different parts, and seeing details I may have missed the first time.

Once I had a steady outline I was able to write a lot, with new ideas blossoming every second. When I did get stuck, Professor Marvin helped me find more aspects of the essay to write about, and that helped me finish it.

Even though Laymon's essay had the same amount of words each time I read it, I gained a new perspective each time. For example, he wrote about a man he observed outside his window. Each time I read it, I thought of different reasons why he included that in this piece.

I could expand this piece with in-depth writing on his other essays and novels, or how there are two sides to the publishing world, one of which is rarely heard about.

What I take away from this research experience is that I feel like I know Kiese Laymon by reading through his words and eyes. The essay was in second person, which had us walk in his shoes during his experience and helped the reader to empathize and understand his situation.

I enjoy analyzing works of literature and finding the deeper meanings behind a line or paragraph. I enjoyed writing this paper and even though it was challenging at times, I had fun delving into different themes and aspects. I want to read more of Laymon’s works and see similarities and differences in his writing. He is a talented writer who writes what he believes no matter what anyone says.